Why apologize? This is a god damn masterpiece my friend. 5/5 for the story.

Goodness, this is just so lovely! I absolutely adore your style and this has such a nice color pallet. I just happened to stumble across this and I'm so glad I did. I think I do agree with a few of the other comments, however; that it would definitely be a plus if the dialogue was spoken. Perhaps some more foley other than the pulling of the cloth. The repetitive music is slightly distracting. That being said, I'll definitely be looking at the rest of your work!